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Submitted: February 28, 2008
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i was sort of surprised with this out come. the really kool thing coming out of his hand was done sum paint brush thingy.(photoshop) any ways, comment. traditional pic coming soon
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o.o scary!

I love his expression. He kinda reminds me of ichigo from bleach...

so, do you want a critique?

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"I know the shadow always being there doesn't make much sense, but screw it, it's a manga and if it works then I don't care. :P" -- squigeyjoe
This pic is awesome I like the sword in addition to da thing coming out his hand
yes

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thanks

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'kay :D everything I say will be from my POV, not the picture's.

1.draw broader shoulders
2.left upper arm too long
3.left upper arm - add more muscles
4.the sash should be higher
5.right lower arm kinda fat compared to the muscly body
6.small hand - make it bigger

I hope that should suffice :)

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"I know the shadow always being there doesn't make much sense, but screw it, it's a manga and if it works then I don't care. :P" -- squigeyjoe
yea sorry bout the lower lower arm thing. i tried to get some minor perspective in there. cuz his weapon is behind him.

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yeah, I realized that but it's still a little awkward. Try to define the lines more. :)

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"I know the shadow always being there doesn't make much sense, but screw it, it's a manga and if it works then I don't care. :P" -- squigeyjoe
thank you

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